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Jim was a small broad man, with a very short temper; he had and acne scars all over his
patchy red face. There were nights when you would could here hear that poor woman
scream., then you’d see her the The next morning with her face would be covered with
makeup that never matched her skin tone, that make up and always made her black eyes look
worse, but you’d still get a smile from the nervous, friendly woman whom James adored.
James would have died for his mother, and he tried to protect her as much as he could,. hHe
had a knack of distracting his father, he would by complimenting him on something or
handing over his pocket money, claiming he found it or stole lemonade bottles from the
neighbour’s yard,. tThis often gave Jim a smile and sendt him off to bed.
Often James did steal;. It was just small petty theft, but then again James would have walked
to the end of the earth to make his mum feel safe. He couldn’t wait to grow up and give that
monster of a dad a good hiding. ‘I’ll teach him one day,’ James said with eyes full of hatred.