Adjectives: Less Is More

Adjectives: Less Is More

The long-haired cat with a bushy reddish tail and green eyes strode across the rocky, wet ground while surveying the tall green-speckled bamboo. Did you give up reading before getting to the end of that sentence? I needed a two-shot coffee just to write it! There a...
Royal Order of Adjectives

Royal Order of Adjectives

Nouns can be modified by multiple adjectives. For instance, “the old blue plastic bin.” But can you just order them in any way? “The plastic blue old bin” doesn’t sound quite right. That’s because there’s a royal order of...
Get Your Word Count Right!

Get Your Word Count Right!

In today’s literary world, competition is stiffer than ever. With so many books being published each year, it can be difficult for your voice to be heard above the noise. So how can you make sure that your book stands out? One way is to pay attention to word...
Walking through Doorways Causes Forgetting

Walking through Doorways Causes Forgetting

Have you heard of this interesting phenomenon? It’s called the doorway effect*. You’ve probably experienced it. It’s when you go into a different room and forget why you went in. Parts of your brain are always alert to danger so the first thing your working memory...
Read Books in Your Genre

Read Books in Your Genre

Dialogs A client of mine has written a novel. While editing, I wonder how many novels he has read. (Also read on if you’re writing non-fiction. This is also relevant for you.) Often, his dialogs go like this: John said, “What’s the matter, Mary? Are you ill?” Mary...